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fifi♡'s avatar

you da real yearner

(its so good✨)

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

regrettably so 🫩thanks for reading fifi i rly appreciate you

- ̗̀✮ light's sidequests ₊˚୧‧'s avatar

THE MARIAS REFERENCE!!!! LOVED THIS 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 You are amazing!

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

HELL YEAAAA IM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!! you’re awesome 🫂 i spent an hour or so writing and recording this cover last night im rly glad you enjoyed it

Matilda's diary |otrovert🏎️🫧's avatar

So I came here when the post is already deleted.

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

hahaha i appreciate you intending to read, i’ll drop a new poem sure im soon j letting it marinate

Matilda's diary |otrovert🏎️🫧's avatar

Would love to read it.

Zara's avatar
Jul 20Edited

i loved reading this. and please please please, i'm begging you don't take it the wrong way, don't want to seem like a creep but still saying it because why not, you have pretty eyes. like i'm not sure if all the pictures of eyes all over your posts and pfp are your eyes but well, pretty eyes.

okay now i've embarrassed myself, sorry sorry sorry

BYE

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

lmaoooooo well first thank you for reading zara im grateful for you and and your comment; those are my eyes and thank you for the compliment you didn’t embarrass yourself at all i don’t think it’s weird. again i appreciate you for reading and commenting i hope you enjoyed the poem

siimiiii ;)'s avatar

I've reached a state of mourning for my lover and wnv I see yall yearn so good I sob

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

lmaoooo thank you so much for reading simrah 🫂im happy this was so compelling for you

siimiiii ;)'s avatar

The keratin remnants woke up the bio knowledge in me, that was GOOOD, again i loved it sm and ur welcomeee

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

ngl i hit flow state for that line 🙂‍↕️im happy you appreciated it and again ty for reading

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siimiiii ;)'s avatar

Sorry sister but that poem is not for us but for his future wife

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siimiiii ;)'s avatar

Oh wait i did not do anything, who said i liked him 😭

مریم's avatar

"words only eyes can speak" MAN

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

🙂‍↕️appreciate you reading maryooma thank you

saif's avatar

Thank you for writing this. Just thank you.

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

bro i cant even express how grateful i am that you took the time to read this and that you even restacked and commented; that means the world to me and im so grateful for you 🫂🖤all love for you saif

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Even the paired geese are showing you what love is like. Wow. That last part with the shared like almost symbiotic stuff with the arteries was crazy good adham! Also bro can PLAY 🎸🎸🎸🎸

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

i appreciate you so much for reading and listening william 🫂🖤yeah ngl idk what happened but i hit flow state for this one. thank you so much again for reading/listening/the amazing comment dude, youre awesome

William Melgar's avatar

Thank youuuu adham🤍🤍🤍

Jazz's avatar

as someone whose religion is also a part of their identity, i found this to be beautiful!

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

i appreciate you a ton jazz 🫂thank you so much for reading im rly glad this resonated with you

Jasla💌's avatar

adorning the arteries of your heart as you have mine. "Im dead 🫡

This is soo beautiful 🤍

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

appreciate you a ton jasla thank you for reading 🫂

صباح's avatar

I love this poem, beautifully written and I really really like the jugular vein line

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

thank you so much for reading it means a lot to me 🫂and thank you i lowk cooked with that one idk how it happened but it did

nya<3's avatar

adhammm you did it again!!! and the recording ughhhh

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

nyaaaa😛i tried and thank you for listening i rly hope you enjoyed it

nya<3's avatar

i realllyyy did adham! i read + listened during my english class it was so good i read it again after as wellll<3

Haider's avatar

the track and the yearnslop❤️‍🩹🤲🏼 mashallah akh… beautiful beautiful beautiful

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

appreciate you a ton habibi 🫂thanks for reading

Jasmeen | جاسمین's avatar

I'm honestly at a loss for words because every line of this poem radiates longing and emotion. Especially the llast line has my heart , and by the way, the music is absolutely fantastic, Adham!🤍✨️

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

thank you so much for reading and for the awesome comment jasmeen 🫂means the world to me truly and thank you so much for reading with intention. i rly appreciate you a ton

Rido   ⋆˙⟡'s avatar

I’ll let your future wife know you been yearning since 2026 and giving the entire Substack app masterpieces as you do so

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

always an amazing day when you comment 🙂‍↕️thanks so much for reading rido🫂“masterpiece” is wayyyyyy too kind and say less, ive got a couple lil notebooks full of more i just might post some

alex's avatar

your poetry + really good music = kiss chef

adham |  أدهم 🇪🇬's avatar

too kind, appreciate you a ton for reading and listening alex 🫂